Oh lovely surf break.
How you make me so happy.
You create the waves.
The future is near.
The flying cars, the new style.
It makes me wonder.
Oh lovely surf break.
How you make me so happy.
You create the waves.
The future is near.
The flying cars, the new style.
It makes me wonder.
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October 30, 2019 at 12:34 am
Are you good at surfing. Also your poems sound a bit robotic at times.
October 30, 2019 at 4:01 am
That’s how haiku’s are supposed to be
October 31, 2019 at 12:05 am
Julien, I really enjoyed your poems. What do you think of haiku? I especially like the challenge that type of poetry puts before you to choose exactly the right word, the most descriptive word to capture what you mean, since you get so few syllables.
I loved your line, “It makes me wonder.” Hmmm. The photo combined with that line made me stop and think.
Keep up the great blogging!
~Miss Blessing
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