The Darkness of Man’s Heart – Tribalism and LOTF
And in the middle of them, with filthy body, matted hair, and unwiped nose, Ralph wept for the end of innocence, the darkness of man’s heart, and the fall through the air of the true, wise friend called Piggy.
That is a quote from the end of William Golding’s, Lord of the Flies and what I think is a perfect summary of all that I learn from it. The book explores man’s inherent evil and the loss of innocence to savagery and it is an ideal piece of literature to answer the question; what is the role of tribalism in society?
The latest project in Social Studies and English 11 has been centred around Lord of the Flies and tribalism in society. We worked hard for 4 weeks to answer our driving question.
What is the role of tribalism in society?
Obviously, a milestone in this project was actually reading Lord of the Flies. When I get assigned book projects in school I get very nervous and a bit pre-stressed because I know I am slow at reading and that I will need a lot of time to finish a book. Lord of the Flies is a short book but it’s a tricky read, and my goal was to finish the book on time! So I set aside lots of time to read and in the end, I achieved my goal of finishing it on time. I am very proud of myself for that. I really enjoyed the book and have become much more confident in my reading ability that I have more motivation to read on my own time. I have also noticed an improvement in my writing style after reading the older English style book. Here is an example of an analysis response I did for this project.
Another key stepping stone to this project was to respond personally, critically, creatively, and reflectively to the book while making connections between ourselves and the world. We had to write many response paragraphs on different topics, much like the one I included above. Unfortunately, I went away right in the middle of this project so I don’t have much work to show off. Out of the work I did complete with the knowledge I had at the time I’d say the responses could use some improvements. I did find it easy to make connections between Lord of the Flies and real-world examples but I felt like I could have improved on the “Writing Process” competency of grade 11.
The Writing Process
Transform ideas and information, using appropriate features, forms, and genres, through the writing process to plan, create, assess, and refine original, engaging, and meaningful literary and informational texts for a variety of purposes, audiences, and messages while using an increasing repertoire of conventions (Canadian spelling, grammar, and punctuation) and appropriate citations for clarity, effectiveness, and impact.
As expected, my first couple of journal prompts were not as strong as they could have been. I went away just as the teachers really guided us through this competency, so I missed out on that. If allowed to do revisions I would want to change some structure and content aspects of the responses. However I don’t believe putting that effort into those revisions is necessary at this moment and instead, I want to take what I’ve learned and put it into the next project.
With all these stepping stones you must be wondering what the end product of this unit is. Well after gathering evidence from the book and from each response paragraph, we were ready to answer the driving question. For this, I presented a 3-5 minute keynote answering the driving question. We had to use examples from Lord of the Flies and one other tribe. I chose to use the Khmer Rouge as my case study and I talked about what makes a political party a tribe. The feedback I got on my project told me it was a strong presentation. I demonstrated the ability to read a book and connect the text to real-world events which is one of the competencies we focused on this unit. Here are some of the comparisons I made between the book and the event.
After visiting Cambodia and seeing the effects of the Khmer Rouge I really wanted to incorporate my knowledge into the final project. I mean, I was away through half the unit so I felt obliged to show that I had learned something while I was gone. I took the knowledge I had from the trip and expanded it with external research. After reading the book I noticed many of the connections right away. I was really proud of the amount of information I had gathered on the subject. When I had to present the project to the teachers, Mr. Hughes stayed in the room. I had known from before that he had done Asian Studies and was a fan of Cambodia so I was a bit nervous. But I didn’t get torn apart at the end so I will take that as a compliment towards my research! As I final reflection of the whole unit, I am very proud of the presentation I completed.
This project was quite the learning curve for me in a new way. Because I was away for a good chunk of it, I had to make up assignments out of school while still catching up on the other classes I missed. I’d say the work I put out under the pressures of jet lag and missed classes was pretty impressive quality and I am very proud of myself.
As always thanks for checking in, I am still in school!