The stared

We were first assigned into groups based on a form that we sent out a bunch of factors that we like to do what our willing commitment is, I put my commitment out the lowest because I don’t care about it. And then we filled out other forms like material forms, agreement forms contracts, and then we started making our machines and making our stories in my group we started on the story for which our story was both too long and good.

Tournament 

1 of all we got cut at the beginning of our story and also our machines didn’t work for one of them didn’t work. It just fell over which caused it to break which is not what we wanted yet at least but it turns out we didn’t do the worst because some group didn’t put the machine in the zone, which was taped out with green

Feed back 

the feedback that we got was revisit our machines and make our story shorter because our story was good. It was just too long

For all my mpol I chose the projects Frankenstuffy and Unboxing Me to talk about. I struggled a little bit with Unboxing Me. I struggled a lot more with it because of my time management skills and because I had a hard time editing it. Unboxing Me was where I did the first two and I forgot all about the rest of them until the day before it was due.  I had to spend all night doing them which took me two hours to finish all of them. Frankenstuffy was a challenge because the editing that was hard for me. I am not too good with editing skills and I’m not good with trying to like find resources. The ones that are in Action Movie are only a basic ones not really the kind that was looking for so I had to go online.

Feedback

I talked about my time management skills with Mr. Harris.  Because of my ADHD I have a hard time managing my time. I’ve got his class at the end of the day and he often notices how I am not as focused anymore because my pills have worn off.  He said something he does to help him when he gets sidetracked is to eat healthy fruits like apples and bananas. He says it helps him stay focussed on stuff. I think I would like to try this by myself. Something that I noticed that makes me stay a little more focus is flipping around my wallet on the back of my phone. I am going to try that too. I am going to try and take my pill even later.  The point of taking it later is so the effects start later and I can stay more of task until of the school day. Another thing he said I should do is to set alarms to do my homework at the table instead of in my room when my mom gets home and not after dinner. Mr. Harris also said I can ask to go out in the hall to do dictation so I can get my work done in class. He told me not to worry if dictation doesn’t work all the time, it doesn’t always work for him. So will use it to get my ideas down and not forget what I was thinking in class and then I can then I can look it over to make sure everything makes sense to everyone.

Thank you for listening to me rant for however long this took to read.

the Frankenstuffv’s we started with making a map of an A mediaeval society going into an industrial Society like what happened to a lot of towns in the The industrial revolution

  I noticed as we were getting closer to finish this. It started breaking my iPad, not like breaking breaking it just like it started to get really glitchy and nearly by the end mine was my iPad was overheating.

the next thing we did would start writing about our character with our characters personality was like, and I kind of made mine a little too goofy because my main character was named McChunk my mentor‘s name was named Mc cheese, and his rivals name was Macbeth. My character‘s full name was his first name the second name, Mick last name, chunk or just Mc chunk then we had to actually make the character which to me was the fun part cause I’m not I don’t do too much showing actually they don’t do any sowing at all, but besides that of my guy look like a sleep paralysis demon this is what he looks like. the thing I did was, I put extra stuffing in him so I could really cut the mc chunk

When we actually started filming, I couldn’t really do too much filming at first cause I didn’t have a partner cause I needed someone to be Mc cheese, but one of my friends. Danny agreed to help me with us. I was gonna meant to replace him with an actual cheese stuffy, but I kind of forgot about that and it just worked in the end of looked a lot better. I didn’t know what it was gonna look like I’m just rambling again. Then, once we were done the filming, we did the editing with a trick for the hammer strike was every time he hit the anvil on screen I split the point and then put a spark effect. I thought I was gonna have to do explosive because the only spark effect anything close to a spark on iMovie is predator missile hitting some concrete, which is not what I wanted and also I don’t think there’s predator missiles in the directional revolution so I found a free image online that that was close enough to what I was looking for because it was an actual spark from a hammer, but still spark. Then for the audio most of the time I was just filming in my room, so what I would do is, I would fill my floor and I would talk for the characters and I put all the audio.

Driving question

How can we, as writers, weave historical details into our creative storytelling to convey a clear and impactful message?

You could like use bits of what actually happened and then weave it into your story or you could do the other way around where you make your story based on a certain event.

and the one I like between the two is where you leave your still where you make your story around the event because you most time you just think about the big picture you don’t think about what the average person is like going through in those moments I can’t think of one off my top head, but like the soldiers and Moores, you don’t really think about what they’re trying to what they’re thinking about so those are always interesting to me.