Hello world, it’s been a very long time since I’ve posted anything but here I am again. Now let me tell you why I’m back. Over the past few weeks my class has been doing a project on advertising. We started to make posters on three things we need to advertise. I used Canva to make my ads which is very useful when it doesn’t crash. So here I’ll show you my drafts.

The first thing we were supposed to advertise was a tourist spot that teens our age would like to visit.  It could be a special place to us or it could be somewhere random that no one knows about and we do, so I did my grandparents pool. I did it because no one knows about it and everybody loves going to a new pool.

Here is one of the drafts.

The second thing we were supposed to advertise was a business. It could be a family business or a business that you just know the owner. I did my dad’s business which is more like a family business because everybody in my family works there.

Here is one of the drafts.

The last thing we had to advertise was a disaster advertisement. I did mine on earthquake protection and how come you should make a earthquake kit.

Here is one of the drafts.

Now that you saw some of my drafts you know I needed to improve, and how our class did that was basically we went around and critiqued each other on a piece of paper. Let me show you the critique.

These are some of my peers ideas of what I should fix.

When I read the critique I just thought of what they wrote and fixed it. I even put in some few touches of my own.

Thank you for reading my blog post. Soon I’ll be back and then I’ll post the finished copies of my advertisements.